join akatsuki Read this Zahl murphy
I'm only rating 4/10 stars, not because it's bad, but because i know you can do better. By what I saw, you have great drwaning skills on flash. If you animate them more, with action and stuff, i know you could do a pretty decent flash.
Don't take this critic the bad way, try using it in the future.
As for the history, I liked it!
(Naruto) Akatsuki Pirates